Weeping Gold

[S.E. Page]

Beautifully melodic!

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you!

[David Kirkby]

Little haiku verses, falling like rain drops....

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[F.L by Scented Petals]

Lovely!

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you!

[F.L by Scented Petals]

No problem 😉

[Sarah Thompson]

So beautiful, Jodi, the repetitions make it feel like an incantation or a song.

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you Sarah! These are actually drafts of the same haiku grouped together. I’ve never done this before, and I’m so happy to hear it reads well! Usually the “unchosen” drafts disappear. 💚

[Sarah Thompson]

Oh that’s such a creative idea, love that!

[Denise T Drapeau]

Serene and peaceful words and images! Beautiful!

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you so much, Denise 💚

[Denise T Drapeau]

My pleasure!

[Rue Kream]

A lovely haiku sequence. I read it again and again.

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you, that is lovely feedback.

[Jen Wende]

Like a deep breath

[Jodi Proctor]

🙏

[Tracey Hope]

Very evocative.

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you! 🙏

[Colin Riggs]

Love it. Is it a villanelle?

[Jodi Proctor]

Thank you! 💚 No, yet I would love to write one.